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Hannah had been petting her vicious looking kitten for the better part of 20 minutes now. She was on her bed, in a meditation position doing

what looked like some serious hacking. What she was actually doing was a bit different, she was managing her website that went by the name of

“Fortune.org”. This site, being the most massive user driven “Forum” website ever made, was the work of an 18 year old girl named Hannah

Potes. She had dabbled in web design before, but never really got into it until she put up Fortune.

There wasn’t much to manage, since pretty much anything went on the website, but something caught her eye. A post someone had put up. It was put up by /d/, just like every other post, since everyone had to use that name. The picture put up next to the post was a rotating earth that was on fire. But the interesting thing was the contents of the post itself.

“Dear /d/,
I have a friend, yes, a REAL friend, that says he’s going to do something that could hurt a lot of people, I can’t say exactly what it is he’s doing, but it sounds like it could be dangerous. I just had to get that off my chest,

Thanks /d/!”

Being the administrator of the website, she could see where the person lived. Mount Vernon, OH, 43050.

Never heard of Mount Vernon, Hannah thought to herself. She contemplated what it could be that could “hurt a lot of people”. She replied to the post with a smartalic response.

“I bet it won’t beat Cho’s highscore.” She typed, grinning to herself. Evil, but she thought it was rather witty. Her alarm started to ring, indicating that it was time to head out to school. So she got her books, and started heading out to her car, but not before giving a small chuckle at the post she had replied to…

In light of recent thoughts, I am making some modifications to my book, or rather, how I present my book. I will be taking away the last of what I wrote, when I am done with the next part of what I am writing, that way, no one will be able to copy my book very easily.

Thanks!
Bayne

Ok, so, first let me start out with saying the following…meep…

Now let me follow that up with a summary of what I’m going to be contributing here on Avalon’s website. You see, English has always been a passion of mine…Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling…..etc etc. So I’ve started writing a book! And what I’m going to do is share the book with all of you! Now, as I write this book, I would LOVE lots of feedback on it, what you think, what could be better/changed, because although I’m sure it will be a perfect book for all to love and read, I will be allowing you to pretend that it could be better So here is a summary of my book!

Basically, two boys, 19 years of age, Computer Whiz Zach Knopp/General Smart-Guy Clint Given…decide they want to start a project. A project that consists of psychological deception and great influence on the world. But they first must get the funding for such a project. Resorting to petty thievery, they acquire their funding, and come up with possibly the best idea for the project they could have….Getting a patent on Binary Code. Within literally 2 days of getting this patent, they have singehandedly shut down the internet, all video game creation, movie creation, and computer manufacturing. Now being the closest to owning the internet as you could possibly get, these two teenagers buy out Microsoft, and in less than a week they triple what Bill Gates has made his entire life. But this project turns into something much bigger than money. As these two fight for their lives in this epic tale of deception and lies, they will soon find that with great power, comes great responsibility, the hard way.

Chapter 1- The Beginning

“Hey man, you know our project starts today, right?” Zach said calmly as he walked up to his friend.
“Yeah, wouldn’t miss it for the world, but then again, this might just give us the world.” Clint replied as they stopped about a foot away from each other.
Zach gave a nod, then motioned for Clint to follow him. “So I’ve decided on a name for our experiment. I think we should call it ‘Project Ion’.” Zach spouted as they turned to walk down Sunset. Sunset was the name of the street next to Zach’s house, it was known for being the steepest drop in Mount Vernon as far as roads went.

“You remember the first step?” Zach inquired.
“Yeah, large amounts of cash, followed by large amounts of influence.” Clint replied.
“Exactly, that’ll probably be the hardest part of our operation, seeing as not many people have large amounts of money. Or influence for that matter.”
“I don’t suppose we have an ace in the hole? Like some back-up cash or anything?” Clint asked as we turned the corner onto my street.
Zach chuckled a bit, then said “Man, if we had ANY cash, we’d have started this long ago. And besides, I think I know how we’re going to get started. We’ve got a bit of work to do, so let’s get started…”
As they walked into the house, it was no surprise to them that Zachs’ parent’s dog, Roxy, started barking at them. Not the smartest dog in the world, but still lovable. Zach’s little eight year old brother, Gage, was in the center of the living room playing with his toys. From a first glance, they were the living, breathing definition of a normal family. Zach’s mom stayed at home to watch the kids, while his step-dad went to work on the weekends. The middle child, James, was at wrestling practice.
Although being 19 and not having a car, license, or job is usually grounds for instant making fun of, not many people did it, because they could sympathize with his situation. It was a time of economic troubles, and by the sounds of the news everyday, things weren’t getting any better.

But they were men, men on a mission. They sought to inflict great influence on the bitter world. Fame was one thing not easy to come across now-a-days. Especially the good kind of fame.

“So this is what we’re going to do…” Zach said as they stepped into his room. “In short, we’re going to save up enough money to patent the binary code, giving us control of quite a few assets, including the production of software, which should rake in enough money to buy some stocks, and essentially get our feet off the ground.”

“Uhh, ok…you’re the boss…” Clint sputtered.